MangaPractice

im practicing my manga and comic drawing this is like the first time i try as im a story line but its just mostly fighting but eh...Well is a scen in my comic Light Of Darkness(LOD Dont steal from me this is mine mine mine name is mine or suffer!!!!!!!) well...any who enjoy and o yea the pic was drawn on a big page soo.... it cut off a piece of it in the scanner sorry and like always please tell me what i can improve on and i know the monster looks weird but hey its a monster